Lost (cut-up poem)

by simply crissyboo   Jul 31, 2006


I'm shouting in whispers,
but nobody hears,
so angry and confused,
for so many years,
please, can you tell me,
which way is up?
Where is this place?
What's all this stuff?
That's how lost i am,
can i ever be found?
Those are my questions ,
I want answers now.

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i know this poem is lame, but it's a cut-up and that's just how the lines happened to be. (if you don't know what a cut-up is, read my comment that i put on My Story)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Laasya

    I really like it...
    keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    I like this poem a lot because i can really relate. Great job. The flow is good. The rhyme scheme is good. Keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I really like it. it has great emoitoin in it. its very good. u have talent.. i like hte flow of it... great job 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by trigirl422

    I think its really god...comment back