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I really like it. it has great emoitoin in it. its very good. u have talent.. i like hte flow of it... great job 5/5
take care
angie

I like this poem a lot because i can really relate. Great job. The flow is good. The rhyme scheme is good. Keep writing. 5/5

I really like it...
keep up the good work!