Dad

by Brittney   Jul 31, 2006


I am not perfect

it\'s time that you see

youve made me feel horrible enough

now leave and let me be

you werent a horrible father

you were always there

but you let lose those hatred words

and to me that wasnt fair

I did all that I could

to make you proud of me

you never noticed all I tried to do

there is nothing more for me to say, other than im through.

I will always be your daughter, that I cannot hide

but let me lead my own life, and try to control your pride.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    I like it
    its good
    and so true to other people
    5/5
    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney

    I really like this poem. It had a nice flow to it. Good job. But at the end I would change led ti let. But if it's supposed to be like that ok.