Comments : The ups and downs

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Ooohh. how sweet. I imagine that love is something like that...
    "Soul sores" sounded, um, a bit strange, because I have never heard it before, but yes, I suppose that is about right, how the soul gets sores on it when you are hurt to the heart..
    I suppose I don't make much sense, but I just wanted to say that this poem reflected a lot of truth, such as in the lines "Love hurts and makes you cry
    one second you're happy the next you wanna die"
    I have seen that happen to people.

    Good Writing.

    //T.L.//

  • 18 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    I like this one 5/5