To sum this up in one word......AMAZING!!

Omg, Sarah. This was really sad. And for some weird reason in my head, I thought it would go really well as a song. Anyways, It was written really well, just sad. Loved how you ended it though, very strong. Keep it up, and smile, mmkay? 5/5

Natalie``

Aw such a cute poem.....keep it up.....great ending as well

Good job... liked it a lot...

::MELI::

Idk if its 4.8 I LOVE IT!