Wow very beautifully written. 5/5

But tears are still falling,
shining like little stars.
That's got to be my favorite line, but I also love the last line, the praying for a blessing from above. These lines express a lot of emotion and bolden the poem, making it stronger. Love it! Once in a while the rhymes seemed a little forced, but other then that perfect! Keep writing!

Aww I found this poem to be sad.. very beautifully written though 5/5 xx