Comments : I become numb

  • 18 years ago

    by ajda

    Dam,....sick as poem when i say sick i mean really good job i love it n greta ending

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow..thiswas really descriptive! it was GOOD! i loved everything about it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing i love it. i kno exactly how u feel. i can totally relate to this.. ur talented i love this poem. great job. if u ever wana talk im here jus email me
    take care
    luve angie

  • 16 years ago

    by Rin

    A black heart huh'... be careful - it might turn into stone... and that, can ruin a whole lot... take it from somebody who knows.

    And like Angie I would like to offer you the possibility of coming to me when there's something you need/want to talk about...

    But it is a beautiful poem - really...