Babydoll

by lexie   Aug 1, 2006


They call you baby doll,
they play with your blonde hair,
your blue eyes blow them away,
but they don't know you,
your favorite show,
your birthday,
what you sing in your car,
they don't care,
all they wanna do is sex you,
and you have no clue,
there is so much more they will never know,
cuz they're to occupied with superficial coincidences,
its a shame for you,
and your perfect skin,
your manicured nails,
and your daddy bought clothes,
cause you'll never know,
what the real world is like,
as long as they call you,
baby doll.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hmmm, it could've doe with more flow. but honestly, it was a brillinat poem. very well thought out and the ending was quite powerful. i adored it. amazing. 5/5
    : D Snoo

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Adorable poem, really. Nicely written, although it's pretty cut-throat truth. This may have been written for a specific person, but it truly fits a whole stereotype of people. Good job, 4/5.

    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This was a good poem with a good meaning behind it.
    i did catch one thing in this sentence :
    "all the wanna do is sex you,"
    i think what you meant is:
    "all THEY wanna do is sex you,"
    well otherwise it was good=D...Keep up the great poems!!!

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