This was a good poem with a good meaning behind it.
i did catch one thing in this sentence :
"all the wanna do is sex you,"
i think what you meant is:
"all THEY wanna do is sex you,"
well otherwise it was good=D...Keep up the great poems!!!

Adorable poem, really. Nicely written, although it's pretty cut-throat truth. This may have been written for a specific person, but it truly fits a whole stereotype of people. Good job, 4/5.

As always~ Kate

Hmmm, it could've doe with more flow. but honestly, it was a brillinat poem. very well thought out and the ending was quite powerful. i adored it. amazing. 5/5
: D Snoo