Oh so sad, but so great written. I think you have a nice talent in writing poetry,keep up the great job

This was sooo sweet and sad...it even made me cry a little!! I loved this poem...sooo beautiful!!!!WOW!! Even if it didn't rhyme, it flowed perfectly!!!! 5/5

Sweet and sad -- it almost made me cry! Haunting a beautiful piece, really. This is a very strong poem and I'd encourage you to look into publishing it, except it seems quite personal. DEFINITELY a 5/5, easily.

As always~ Kate

Oh... my.... god. That was incredible. i adored the repeat of the lines he spoke. VERY effetcive. 5/5 for a killer poem. it was so sad. so very touching.
-Snoo