Stranger

by SammiBABY   Aug 1, 2006


Dark fears among an untangled winding path of danger,
Pale cover; inside lies a deceitful, merciless heart of a stranger,
Once a memorable figure of contentment, now there is only gloom,
Azure eyes changed to black. False friendliness fills the room

I feel fulfilled by past experience but unwanted in this place
Deep relentless spite shone obviously on her face
Her endearing, honest smile transformed into a repulsive glare
Her words now sound forced like theres no decency still to share

She is not her, or maybe she never was anything. An honest delusion,
Wonders arise for me, thinking her niceness was only an illusion
Her value is lost; Contemptible now, deserving of my despise,
I will never forget that moment; I saw a stranger within her eyes

30th July 2006 5:10pm

* I was just thinking of a change i once witnessed.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    " an honest delusion"....... wow... i love that line.... very well put together.... it flows very nicely...and it is very step by step theres no tangents or scattered thoughts yet its still descriptive enough to paint a picture and then at the same time leaves the question of what actually happened.... excellent job

  • 18 years ago

    by Nada

    I like the imagery, BEAUTIFUL description

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Great poem...makes me think alot

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    I like the same lines as natalie, samm this is awesome!!! it did remind me of something xoxo i hope ya ok bub and talk soon xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    She is not her, or maybe she never was anything. An honest delusion,
    Wonders arise for me, thinking her niceness was only an illusion

    [[I really liked those lines.]]

    This was a great poem. And it reminded me of something my ex-best friend said to me awhile ago. I thought your choice of wording was fantastic aswell. It was a great write overall. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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