I enjoy the feeling.
The feeling you give when I see your MSN name come on.

[[Strangely enough, I really like those lines. I remember when I loved my friend Mitch, everytime I'd see his name come online on MSN, the most biggest smile would come on my face. lol.]]

It was a sweet poem, I enjoyed it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I really loved this poem. so much emotion was put forth in it. reminds me of a few things ive had. keep up the good work.
Driver

Awwwww.. this was so sweet! your descirptions were very detailed.. your flow worked well, and the emotion was clear! wonderful work! 5/5

I really like this, I can totally relate! Especially the part about MSN lol... Nicely written aswell, i liked the flow to it. Well done I think you are a talented poet
- Polly

Then starts again, it clanking like an old car.
[It's]
I can't seem to think, straight at all.
[No comma would sound better]
If love was so easy.
Then falling out of love should be easier.
And broken hearts, wouldn't exist.
[I LOVED these lines. Beautiful!]

Now this was a good told story... Strong, but a bit rocky. Though I can relate so well, for I am in love, and it's true how you can't think or you get angry at them for not getting on and so on.. I know it. And you displayed that well, great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

"But what would be the fun of loving someone.
If the thrills involved just disappeared?
Enjoy it while you have it."

I loved that part its so true...
yea sometimes love is hard,, ,but then gets harder sometimes too... but good poem! 5/5

Great poem! There was a lot of emotion in it and it made it very relatable............Great job I really loved it!

-AnnMarie

That was awesome sauce ms. Megan. I know how you feel there. Love is bliss until you get hurt. It most definally is hard. The only thing that I noticed that was off was the line: "And I get a lose of words" It should be: "And I am at a loss for words" or "And I get a loss for words." Other than that great job.

A very sweet poem.. i also liked the MSN part.. i can so relate to that and how happy it makes ya feel when the one you love pops up in the corner ;) great work 5/5 xx

Ok u have an idea, but it doesnt flow like, at all. Try putting some rhymes in there a bit more ffort ut worth it when it comes

Wow, such a powerful and emotional poem, it was well written, i really enjoyed reading it. Loved the MSN part, it made it seem all the more realistic, and i can relate to that! keep it up 5/5..please read and comment on my poems, thanks, kirsty palmer xx

I loved it!, this poem is sooo good and so true! amazing write, keep it up! i loved it..

heidi may

Great poem. keep up the great work, your talented to

Wow that is such a beautiful poem, great choice of words, great emotion. Overall it was a great poem. Keep it up. 5/5

Hey thanks for the comment , by the way your poems rock good job and keep it up