Journey Through The Start

by Driver   Aug 1, 2006


For so long her heart has been forsaken,
A hard road now chosen to be taken.
Her tears have been running wild,
Ever since she was just a child.

The force of his hand left the scar,
Now her trust is held away too far.
With no vigor left to hold onto,
Her fighting spirit turned blue.

Tiny light flows into the dark,
In her heart it left its warm mark.
Love has found her weak heart,
Beckoning her for one final start.

Her first steps are taken with fear,
Holding everything she finds dear.
Passion is her guide to a new place,
Hoping she sees the mysterious face.

Each new breath dries her tears,
Saying goodbye to forgotten fears.
Trust now holds her tired heart,
As she journeys through the start.

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  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very well done, I really enjoyed the flow and content of this poem. I loved it. 5/5 Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Awww, it was so beautifully written! Your words described a sad and true story at the beginning and then the end was so amazing! It took my breath away! I loved it!
    "...Each new breath dries her tears,
    Saying goodbye to forgotten fears.
    Trust now holds her tired heart,
    As she journeys through the start. "
    ^^It was such a beautiful ending to what seemed to be a sad poem! Great work, my friend. Keep writing...
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Pst: Thank you very much for commenting on my poems! It means a lot that you offered to!

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Excellent Ending!! Definatly left me with nothing to say!! Love poems that make me feel like that!!! Wonderful Job ...5/5
    -Krissey

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Very different and beautiful. Your words are simple yet they hold a powerful and deep message. I liked this unique structure and idea. Keep up your great work! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    This is a very unique poem that is why i like it...to me it flowed very well! AND the ending was very strong and BEAUTIFUL!

    Passion is her guide to a new place,
    Hoping she sees the mysterious face.--loved these lines!!

    5/5

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