by Natalie Aug 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
You had fallen from heaven straight into my arms, |
WOOOOOOW! :X nice work. |
by Wallace
Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that. |
by blueknight
Awesome the first stanza was very very good starter and the third stanza was great also i love those stanze and hey a very good emotion and vivid details great piece |
Inticing, seductive poem. Beautifully written and put together. The flow was nearly perfect and it was quite original, for a love poem. |
by Megann Lee
Wow. That was awesome. I loved every part of this poem. It was sweet, and very heart touching. Awh.. I feel like re-reading it. :] Great Job Deary. |