As I fall asleep ...

by Lost in my past   Aug 1, 2006


As I fall asleep
listening to the rain
I wonder in my mind
why i\'m in so much pain.

As I fall asleep
listening to the rain
I think of my future
and what I have to gain.

As I fall asleep t
listening to the rain
I wonder about the point
and where I should aim.

*Please comment it would mean a lot! I thought of this well after midnight so it\'s not that good!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by beth

    I'ts good. Not amazing but alot better than ok- lol I'm sorry, I make no sense. Keep it up, Beth. (F.Y.I. this is a comment saying I liked it- in a very confusing way.)

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