by Twisted Heart Aug 1, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
other
My child arises each morning |
Ha! thats funny i feel bad for ya |
by Nada
This poem is very amusin but not funny, u should put it in the "life" section under family...keep up the good wrk, i liked how it flowed |
by gabrielle.Xx
Wow superb |
OMG! I loved it! You certainly made me smile, thanks! It was a great funny poem and although I havent read many poetry of this style yet, I can say this was one of the best so far! I totally understand you, because having a younger sister also has its funny little drawbacks. But its just natural they want to know, they need to know! I love the way kids may make you laugh at the most unexpected moments! BTW, this poem was amazing, the rhyming worked perfectly and I specially liked this stanza: |
I like this and can totally relate-though my daughter is grown now, I remember her asking'Why is the sky blue?', 'Where does God live??'"Is there a Bigfoot?' and on and on.You've captured this very well and it brings back memories both frustrating and funny as I tried to answer the questions of a child.Very well expressed. |