This has good rhythm i loved it hope your ok though :):)
could you have a look at my poems plz and tell me what you think i like as much feedback as possible thnx xxx alex xxx

Thanks for the comment! This is a really good poem. I can relate to it a lot. Good Job.

I really liked this one. You were honest about the felt emotion of what comes with cutting yourself. Well done.

-Kayla

Hey greatpoem, well done,
love mel

Wow this has alot of emotion packed in, and i luv it it deserves omre than a 5.5 leah xx ur a great writter

WOW! I absolutely loved it!

Wow another fabtastic poem i think your special talent is the way you space out your poem and basicaly present it and also it flows so well and fantastic rhythm keep going!!

At the start, I didn't think the whole "to cut or not to cut" thing would work out, but it flows nicely at the end. well done?

I can really relate to this poem and I think this was a really amazing poem. I especially liked the last two lines a lot. Good job, keep up the good work!

Aww sad but i can relate to this ! 5/5

~Kristina