by LovelyDivine Aug 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Tears of Sorrow, of Joy and Happiness, |
by Adelle
The lay out of this poem really catches the eye and it is full of strong emotion a marvelous choice of words only one small mistakes: |
Very nice poem, well written and good word use. |
by Fsams
Very nice poem. Your word choice is exceptionally great. The content is cohesive and coherent with the caption. Keep it up. Your poems are lively :) |
Great job. Title is original and the topic is easily related to. An emotional and fine read. |
Wow, good one. Let me start with the title- it's effective and captivating. First stanza could have one extra word in the last line, because of the flow, like: |