Well expressed this poem was realy good :):):)

please could you comment on my poems i like to know what people think of my writing thnx xxx alex xxx

Wow.........
At my age, that's a Big, risky, comment..nevertheless, appropriate
carry on....I am so impressed...
Carry on, sir.

I know you don't like me explaining myself, but... hehe! ;-)

This is essentially my ode to the spiritual nature of every individual on Earth, from the hardcore atheist to the Pope himself, from Koresh to bin Laden.

God and I have a great relationship, and I will never let religion spoil that.

Very nice. the way u word things is astounding. i just hope that someday i could be as talented as you are. you will go far.