One chance

I liked what I assumed this poem was trying to tell the reader. Be yourself, express yourself, and be true to yourself because the longer that you deny you the harder it makes life and the longer you will miss out on the joys around you. I must admit though I didn't particularly like the way that it was presented. I think that it needed more metaphors because it makes it easier for the reader to relate if they don't have the idea of the poem right in front of their face, it gives the reader a much broader spectrum and with that more chances that they will appreciate it. I also think that this poem could have been presented a bit better if the word “You” wasn't viewed so often. It takes away from the message of the poem and it makes it harder for the reader to visualise what is happening. I think a little bit more practise and this poem will be amazing it just needs a bit more work.

This one is so cool! I love it! Keep it up!

Short simple and sweet i loved it very insperational more people should have this kind of out look on life great poem

I really like this one. its really good!

I likes this one too.