Unsociable Hate!

by Kirsty palmer   Aug 1, 2006


Hate hits inside my body, It's pumping through my veins,
It's making my head spin, Sending out all types of pain;
The anger boils up, Making my hands start to sweat,
Still carrying on, people shouting what they threat!
It doesn't scare me, I show no feelings to what's been said,
Causing them to shout more rapidly-like a bull seeing red,
Yet I do not flinch nor do I back down, I stand strong,
Inside it's killing me, but I can't let them know something's wrong!
This my life, and this is my everyday routine;
This is what it's like, and everything remains unseen!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Its very well written. Of course, something so many others have felt once before, which makes it good.

  • 18 years ago

    by xDieRomanticx

    Oooh very nice...i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Nada

    Damn, i like this..esp the part abt the bull seein red...very original

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    Hey!

    this is an awesome poem..
    so much energy and emotion
    loved the choice of words especially
    " Hate hit's inside my body, it's pumping through my veins"

    wonderful and very inspiring!

    wuld love some advice on a few of my poems!

    from ur pal
    sophie :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    An interesting style. It has never occurred to me to write a rhyming-prose-style type of poem.

    You learn something new every day...be it medicines or poem-writing :p

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