I loved this poem you really have a way of putting your stanza in unusual places which personally i feel is more proffesional keep up the good work

please could you comment on my poems i like to know what people think of my writing thnx xxx alex xxx

I like the smillie (sp):

Love tenders these arms
That once were sliced like cake

its a great picture, and a vivid one, because if there is someone who has never seen cake I want to meet them! Lol. you're stunning and your word choice always reflects great emotion. I enjoy reaidn your working, its just harder to find the time. I hope you can for give me! *hugs* We really do need to catch up though!

keep up the pretty fab work!