I lied this poem i could can realte to it which makes it better to read for me anyway :):):)

please could you comment on my poems i like to know what people think of my writing thnx xxx alex xxx

Wow, I read all your poems, this one is my favorite because I can really relate, but they are all good. I noticed your last poem was a suicide poem and it really struck me deep because today I almost lost someone really close to me to suicide and I hope you don't go the same way. you are really good at writing poems and it sounds like your life is going ok, but im not really one to say... I hope you aren't dead, im really worried . If your alive and reading this could you email me or something. Thanks

I love your poem it really means a lot well i can relate to it 5/5 Steve