Aww thats soo sad.. i hope this never happened to u :(

OMG that was really good, but sad! i think its good that ur trying to open the eyes of the world so they see what secretly goes on in some homes and its sad that no one has a clue. Any ways great poem and thanx for the comment!

Wow. that was a really grat poem. it was sad, but powerful. im glad that it didnt happen to you, but its great that you want to let people know that it can actually happen. great job!

Great visual elements, It made me feel sick to my stomach thinking about it. 5/5 Thanks for commenting my poem, they're always appreciated.

I think you had a really good message in here. I'm glad that you care about these things that happen, and that you want to show them to people with a beautiful kind of language(poetry)
but I'm not a big fan of how it was written and the rhyming scheme sounded a little forced. I think you can definitely improve, though! Good job! thx for the comment, it meant ALOT to me. I'm going to go check out your other poems

Omg! this is reli reli good, it made me want 2 cry. it rhymes well and shows the picture of wot is happening, gr8 writing hun. this sort of thing shouldn't happen, i cant beleive any man would do this 2 their daughter, it's sick, it's my worst nightmare. keep up the good writing. xxxBETHxxx n fnx 4 commenting sum of my poems xxx

Nicley expressed, and your rite we never know what happens behind closed doors, and it certainly does happen, but is gd 2 capture people attention to the mater, nice one. keep making it public!

Thats really good i to hope that it has not happen to anyone out there

Lice
&&thanks for your comment =]

Wow that was good! u really captured the emotions like fear, helpless, trapped...your great writer! good job!

Heartwrenching and really makes you feel the pain of the particular subject. Again 5/5

Very good...i cant believe how much feedback u have gotten! u have talent and its such a shame to have to realize that this happens so often..it is a horrible thing..great flow and terrific job overall...
thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

WOW! very well written.....so sad.....reminds me of the bad times i've been through.....keep going you are so talented

WOW thats a sad poem but great words u fit them all in place. Good Job :)!!!!!

Damn.....you knwo it reminds me of this one time me and my dad and sme friends beat up this one guy becuase my friend came to me one day and said my dad raped me before and a coupel of dayz ago man I've never hated someone so much in my life i made sure he felt pain far be on worst then that can be doen in hell to this day i dont regret it

Wow. You're an amazing writer.
I really hope this didn't happen though.
You've got all the emotion and all the hurt captured in your words.
It's amazing.
5/5.
Keep writing
xxxxx

An incredible poem- i can hardly believe you didn't write it based on truth, it seems so emotional. beilliant xx