OMG...what a beautiful tribute!! I am so sorry he died! That is so sad and horrible and he didn't deserve it...NOBODY deserves that! It sounds like you two were very much in love...and i am SO sorry for your loss!! GREAT poem though! 5/5 :)

This is cute! I LOVE it!you hear me LOVE it!

This is so sad but AWESOME i am sooo sorry for ur lost this poem touch my heart u r a great poet keep it up.5/5.
sweet tearsxoxo

Wow, excellent poem. so heartfelt, congrats. every word seems perfectly chosen and placed. congrats. =D
xxx

Awww he sound like a good friend and hope the shooter is haunted by pain im always here for ya love ya
Avril xoxo

Aww thats sad. great poem keep it up 5/5