Here I Lie

by ItalianGirL007   Aug 1, 2006


Here I lie
Tears streaming down my eyes
Missing you so dearly
All I ask myself is, "Why?"

Why did you leave me
What did I do
I loved you so dearly
I thought you did too

You were my everything
I thought I was yours
Now I can see
That was clearly untrue

They say time will heal
But how much time is that?
I hope my depression ends soon
Because I'm sick of being sad

Maybe one day
I will find my real true love
Someone who will love me forever
And we will fly together, like two turtle doves

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  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    This was a poem which rhymed nicely, and had good content.

    However, perhaps you should consider changing the second "too" to something else. I also found the story a little fast.

    Of course, it's lovely as is, as is evident by the high score it's receiving, and the fact that comment person above me placed it at 5/5. These are just my thoughts on improving it further...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awwah this is really cute, and i hope that this character does find love! great write, keep it up! 5/5.. please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

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