Forgive Me

by Ariana   Aug 1, 2006


Forgive Me (REVISED)

Please forgive me for hurting you.
(I have broken you, yet again).
I'm no longer that cruel, but...
I find I can't sleep.

Your tears haunt my dreams.
Your anguish drowns me.

(How could you ever have deserved
the pain I you through?)

This guilt will be my downfall...
forgive me, forgive me.

original:
please for give me for hurting you.
I have broken you yet again.
I'm not longer that cruel.
But I find I can't sleep.
Your tears haunt my dreams.
Your anguish drowns me.
This guilt will be my downfall,
forgive me, forgive me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautiful poem. Nice word usage and good flow.

    [Tragic]

  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Superb.... i love every line... it all portrays guilt oh so well...and i love how you didn't use the common lines of drowning in tears you basically took the expected lines for anguish and tears and switched them.... very creative.... excellent job

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