I really loved this one and I can kinda relate to it. You did a great job on this one, very beautifully written. I think you really captured what you were feeling with this one and so it was easier for me to get into it and relate to it.
Great job.
5/5 for sure
Breanna

This 1 i can relate to i think this 1 is awsome......5/5

Amazing, I agree with Breanna that you really captured what you feel in this one! 5/5

This poem it touches every ones heart and it touch my heart very great awesome!