Very intresting it rhymed in some parts but not others but the changing did not dretract from the poem I enjoyed it

Hey hun... sorry I only just saw this here... and ur pleading 4 ppl 2 read it in the posts! lol.... wow kris... that's rather deep sweetie. lol I'm not going 2 lie and say it was fantastic cause it actually creeped me out... lol um....yea if you wana talk about it pm me!!! lol cause I've had experiences like this and it's really scary.... *HUGS* luv ya Ruthie xoxo