Is this a pun against women. Or maybe just wives. Cute none the less.

I read this to my wife and she understood the humor. She has no fear of speed and gets upset with me if I am not going at least five miles over the speed limit. She always interrupts any conversation with me no matter how moving if you will pardon the pun
She seems to live her life trying to get from one point to the other in the shortest possible time. Maybe she should stop to smell the roses

The last two lines rhymed but didn't have that certain type of rhyme the rest of the stanzas did.. Does that make sense to you?

Otherwise I really liked this.. I honestly think you're downloaded a lot of the time... You have amazing work..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Hahaha
a good one,
You did a wonderful job in this poem too short but too great.

I thought this poem was rather well written, in fact. Especially when my style is no where near funny lol. The flow was perfect for all the lines, and the rhyming was terrific! The vocab you used was incredible, and I actually knew what they meant >.< Good job! Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Lol.. the poem flew perfectly, and rhymed well, it was well vocabed too, i enjoyed reading it, and the last stanza did make me laugh aroung (yes my mum did think i was going mad laughing at the computer screen lol) please read and comment on my poems, thank you .. kirsty palmer xx

Not funi

I think you have to have a certain perspective on life to get the humour here. And I smiled when I got to the end. Thank you, Michael, for brightening my day.

Very good Michael i love the last stanza the best. It made me laugh. Great poem.

tabby

Awesome! I loved this one. You are truely a great poet. 5/5 Loretta

Excellent piece! Excellent last stanza