by Megann Lee Aug 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Blue eyes as bright as an October sky. |
by Tiny Reader
Blue eyes as bright as an October sky. |
Wow! this poem really caught my attention, it was kind of like reading a scary story, it gave me chills. You did an excellent job on this poem, and even though it didnt rhyme it flowed amasingly. |
by Goran Rahim
I like this poem, is is a little dark but full of emotion. great job |
Very well thought out poem. Good work on it. 5/5!! |
I loved this stanza, I can totally relate to it: |