Arising Problems

by Candice   Aug 2, 2006


As salty tears form in my eye
Not a tear allowed to escape
Problems within myself arise
My life spiralling down the drain
As if the plug in the bath had been pulled
My future a blur before my eyes
My feelings locked in a chest
And thrown into the deep blue sea
Until one day someone shall discover it
And pull the burdens within me

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlackHeartRoses

    Nevermind that, Good poem, nice fix, Great job! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by BlackHeartRoses

    Yes, I like it, Very good, but the ending to me is sorta odd, I onno maybe its just me, good anyway!