This poem has a mystical quality to it The imagery expresses the emotion outstandingly

Wow...that poem is absolutely AMAZING...like seriously...it is unbelievable! It left ME unable to breathe! lol...You expressed such emotion and i LOVED every single minute of it! GREAT job!! You're an amazingly talented writer! 5/5 :)

Great poem...loved it.. :)

I cant say i was fascinated by this poem, but it was original and unique in such a way that i can't quite place my finger on it...It kindof confused me about what you were talking about but other than that U ROCK!!

I like this, it's a love poem but with a sort of mystical desperation about it...
"But times moving too slow" I think should be:
"But time's moving too slow"

Other than that it's great well done. 5/5
Polly

I don't know whether this is supposed to be sweet or sad. It feels both to me. I like it though. Another great write.

I didnt vote on this poem cause i honestly couldnt give it a 5. sorry. it was just like all the other love poem. it was still good but it wasn't unique like your other ones so i guess it didnt earn a 5 compared to your other poems. i did like how it started off slow then got faster toward the end though.

Take my burdens- my fears.
I loved the repitition of your pulling me out of the sea.. very good! Rather dull though.

Another "WOW" poem