Awesome peom i loved it great job 5/5 |
by HumanAngel
WOW! You capture the emotion of war and how it affects love and couples wonderfully. I am truly amazed, keep it up! |
-Cries- Oh my god.. That's the first poem to ever make me cry.. That whole time I was thinking of my finacee and of a sinaro (Spelling?) where he could have died... And god it brought back so many memories.. And if you can do that, you know it's a good poem. Great job. |
by CoLliN
Awesome Poem Man |
by CoLliN
Awesome Poem Man |
by Marie
Wow! your poem is just absolutely amazing! the wors, the phrases...it's so original and well thought out! AMAZING JOB! |
by Forsaken
This is the most beautiful poem i have ever read. There is so much heart and soul that was put into this and thats how poetry should be. You are absolutely amazing. 5/5 |
by hbk276
Great peom |
All I can say.. is, AMAZING.. Such a good poem :) I really liked it. |
by WithoutASoul
I love this poem. it kinda reminds me of one of my poems. The men and women to go into war are kind of killing themselves. great poem |
by xkillakellys
Ur an amazinnggg riterrrrr |
by GothicPrincess
Aww what a very good poem....i loved it |
Love it :) |
I Love U More |
by Mark
This poem was a GREAT poem! I loved how the flow was kept all through out the poem. Great rhyming, great short story poem. I loved it! |
by Willow
I got goosebumps upon goosebumps. i was crying from about the third verse. you have a special writting gift and us p&q people are lucky to have ur work available to read. this poem will be loved by many. and should be read to the world one day. so many people go through this kinda thing everyday. you have put what the world needs to hear into perspective. i love this poem and i love all your poems. i am now a tearful fan of your work. keep writting cause i will always read. love willow xxoo |