Comments : Conscription

  • 18 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    Awesome peom i loved it great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HumanAngel

    WOW! You capture the emotion of war and how it affects love and couples wonderfully. I am truly amazed, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    -Cries- Oh my god.. That's the first poem to ever make me cry.. That whole time I was thinking of my finacee and of a sinaro (Spelling?) where he could have died... And god it brought back so many memories.. And if you can do that, you know it's a good poem. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by CoLliN

    Awesome Poem Man
    Keep up the Good Work

  • 18 years ago

    by CoLliN

    Awesome Poem Man
    Keep up the Good Work

  • 18 years ago

    by Marie

    Wow! your poem is just absolutely amazing! the wors, the phrases...it's so original and well thought out! AMAZING JOB!

  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken

    This is the most beautiful poem i have ever read. There is so much heart and soul that was put into this and thats how poetry should be. You are absolutely amazing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by hbk276

    Great peom

  • 18 years ago

    by Andy loves Jesus

    All I can say.. is, AMAZING.. Such a good poem :) I really liked it.
    5/5 X 5!!! dont know why anyone down voted it.. should be 5.0 with 46 votes :P
    Great job.. Andy!

  • 18 years ago

    by WithoutASoul

    I love this poem. it kinda reminds me of one of my poems. The men and women to go into war are kind of killing themselves. great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by xkillakellys

    Ur an amazinnggg riterrrrr

  • 18 years ago

    by GothicPrincess

    Aww what a very good poem....i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by argueing with the rain

    Love it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by xXx3moBabe1507xXx

    I Love U More
    I really like this tho its alot longer than mine...lol
    thnx 4 da comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    This poem was a GREAT poem! I loved how the flow was kept all through out the poem. Great rhyming, great short story poem. I loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    I got goosebumps upon goosebumps. i was crying from about the third verse. you have a special writting gift and us p&q people are lucky to have ur work available to read. this poem will be loved by many. and should be read to the world one day. so many people go through this kinda thing everyday. you have put what the world needs to hear into perspective. i love this poem and i love all your poems. i am now a tearful fan of your work. keep writting cause i will always read. love willow xxoo