by sweet_tears
I like this.So many promises ans\d as i see none of them were kept.5/5 |
Great poem and i know what you mean in the poem great work |
by Aline
Well nice poem, but there r some missing parts i dont know something like mmmmm attractiveness and some rhymes |
by xkillakellys
I reallyy like ittt!!!! alotttttt |
by Cameron
I really enjoy your poems |
by kimara4955
At is so true u believ n fall in love n they jus stonp on ur heart n make it a dream that will neva come true their is onli a small about of desent blokes out their n most are taken bypeople that dont deserve em 5/5 keep writing xxtake carexx |