Save Me Some Skin

by SaveMe?   Aug 2, 2006


Save me some skin
As you eat my heart
Save me a bone or two
As you rip me apart

Save me a fist
As you punch my chest
Save me a tooth
Demolish this girl you detest

Save me a lung
As you throttle me dry
Save me an eyeball
So a tear I may cry

Save me a leg
As you grab my hair
Save me an arm
At my face you tear

Save me a tongue
As I scream and shout
Save me a brain
So I can think this out

Save me a wrist
To snap back into place
Save me a stomach
Bless something I can taste

Save me a hand
To grip onto life
Save me some hair
I wished to be a wife

Save me fingernail
To paint when im dead
Save me some feet
And bury them in lead

Save me some blood
As you pour it around
Save me some lips
As I make no sound

Please rate&&comment
ill return the favor
xxx

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  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow words cannot express how well this poem is. i really like the way it flows together.
    great job!
    aunabeth

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    I really like this one. The rhyme scheme is really good & unforced. Great work, I'll be sure and read more of your poems =)

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Emerald

    Wow thats really amazing... the rhyming is perfect! ^^ xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem...i like it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. such a sad and powerful poem, you wrote it so well, and it flowed perfectly, the ryhming was great, and added fear to the poem, great write keep it up 5/5..please read and comment on my poems.. thank you... kirsty palmer xx

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