Comments : Last heart beat......,still beating...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Marine of my own heart has told me about its thirst
    fire of my own emotions has asked me to burst...
    -loved those lines!

    Great poem...Great use of words!
    I loved it! 5/5
    keep Writing!
    And Keep up the good work!!

    Much Love
    Tormented

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Mmm... amazing im too impress.. keep it up!