That was a good poem! loved the way the words flowed as i read the poem!

The endind to this poem was great lol i loved it :):):) keep up the good work would you comment on my poems plz thnx xxx alex xxx

This was pretty good.. it explained how you were feeling and most of the rhymes worked.. nice job 4/5 p.s. of course you can send your friend that poem as long as you write my name under it.. :)

Its a bit wierd.. but its good. X (please check out my poems / vote comment or add me to your faves... thanks) X

Good poem 5/5 keep working at it and you'll be pretty good