Do You Remember Me Daddy?

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Aug 2, 2006


Daddy you made a promise
but it turns out it wasn't true
daddy you used to be my hero
but now i hold only hate for you

daddy maybe next time the phone rings
you might pay attention to me instead
but i know that it wont happen
its just a fantasy inside my head

maybe when you come home
from halfway around the world
you might remember me again
your forgotten little girl

today i wrote a story for my mummy
my teacher did said i did well and i was glad
but then she asked about my father
he forget about me, so i no longer have a dad

Please vote and or comment it means alot to know what you guyz thing about my poetry love mel

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not sure I understand it ... at all. I did like the beginning, but near the last stanza I got lost...which isn't a good sign..

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Hey mel,
    i love it. its so sad tho. it really is. im sorry that happened. but u have so much talent i love ur poems. they r very good. i can relate to some of them. actually i wish i didnt have a dad. mine treats me like i am 5 instead of 15.. but yea i love this. u did a great job on expressing how u feel about ur dad. keep on writing. i wil keep on reading.

    take care and stay strong
    luve angie

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