Hey mel,
i love it. its so sad tho. it really is. im sorry that happened. but u have so much talent i love ur poems. they r very good. i can relate to some of them. actually i wish i didnt have a dad. mine treats me like i am 5 instead of 15.. but yea i love this. u did a great job on expressing how u feel about ur dad. keep on writing. i wil keep on reading.

take care and stay strong
luve angie

I'm not sure I understand it ... at all. I did like the beginning, but near the last stanza I got lost...which isn't a good sign..

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