Wake Up Mummy (Flatline)

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Aug 2, 2006


Mummy, Will you hold me?
hug and squeeze me tight
mummy can you promise me
you will make it through another night

Mummy please don't flat line
i am missing your big bear hugs
you said you weren't an addict
but know you've overdose on drugs

Mummy don't you leave me
Ive only just started school
the nurse says to say goodbye know
cause your body is getting cool

mummy come back right know
i want more than pictures, you see
mummy if your in heaven
please don't forget me

mummy I'm not OK now
cause your not hear with me any more
mummy all i have are memories
of you flat lining on the floor

Please vote and/or comment, it means alot to get feedback on how i can improve,
thanks and love, Mel

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow!!! such a powerful poem, and so true, it does happen everyday, your poem was very well written, and i could fee the sadness of the young character! erm... no crique..just help;
    in the 3rd stanza, 3rd line, you wrote 'know' i believe it is supposed to read 'now' And also in the 5th stanza 4th line you wrote 'lining'... is it supposed to be laying? but other than that great poem :)
    please read and comment on my poems.. rhank you... kirsty palmer xx

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