Awwah wow.. such a powerful sad poem, but very true, and this situations do occur! great write.. very inspiring! keep it up"! please read and comment on my poems.. thank you... kirsty palmer xx

Very nice...and ^^^ yes it was very powerful i agree.. 5/5 keep it up!

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

Wow sad... i like it tho. it has great rhythm and flow to it. i have to agree with them ^^ this is so powerful and everything. u have so much talent. great job. keep it up
take care
luve angie

This is really good. it's a passionate side i've not seen from you before tom.
it's really sweet how much you love her & you can tell how frustrated you get.
hope she's read it =]

btw rated it a 5 lol x.