Oh wow this is the best so yet. oddly the world has always been like that. that was really good. keep writing:)

Its a cool poem. But i must say its really out of wack. It's not a white world. maybe in some states.. China has control of the US. And goths are weird, not normal, and i thought thats what they wanted to accomplish. if being goth was normal id bet they would want to be normal like normal is seen today.. hmm cool poem.