Comments : The ode of a failure with a gun to my head.

  • 18 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Wow....deep poem
    nice job.
    5/5
    -steph

  • 18 years ago

    by lana

    Very deep
    i loved it it was sad but great wording

    well done!!

  • 18 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    I really like the word choice and thought you put into your poetry. and though I didn't really understand "Thief" and all the directions it went, I liked that.