You stood be me when all was well
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Very cute poem... Strong flow.. But not too strong a message. Something about it turned me off when I was reading it.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

I like this. It is really sweet and kinda brought tears to my eyes... Don't worry if you think you are just stating the good, not every relationship is perfect. Take care!

Aww! This poem is so cute! >.> I'm a sucker for cute things. Lol. The flow was quite good, and some of the rhymes were very easy, and some weren't. Good job though! =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Wow, I loved this poem. It was very well written and the flow was great. Good Job.

Excellent poem, My mom would so love it if I wrote her a poem like this........... Great job,

-AnnMarie

Awww.. that was very sweet! i loved it.. the descriptions were beautiful.. in some places the flow was a little awkward because of the rhymes you used and i dont think that you should use smiley faces in a poem.. lol.. but that is just my opinion.. other than that, wonderful, sweet poem! 5/5

Aww.. .that is a really sweet poem and I'm sorry that you don't get to see her that much anymore. But you did a great job on this poem and I loved it from beginning to end! Great job! 5/5

Aww *hugs* this is a great poem! 5/5 i hope its still true! my fav lines about this slurping of your cup ^-^ cute mental image popped up

Oh. I liked this poem. Makes me happy that I have a Mommy. :] Lovely Job Dear.

Pretty good, not as effective as your other ones though. This could go in the Family section too.

I just love rhymeing poems as you know and this one is excellent with a really good flow it could also relate to a Dad until the very end

Whilst reading it i was thinking of my dad who at this moment is very ill with merkels cancer and lives halfway acroos the world and I cried

Love it 5/5

John

This poem is soo very sweet! n i liked it!!

WoW all i have 2 say is that this is a great poem i give u a 5/5

I liked this very much, i thought it was really sweet.

Awwwwwwww........yea it would b...i hav no perfect mother more lik a perfectionist.....well a 5/5 for me..

Very good... i love it... nicely written 5/5