by Catastrophic Beauty Aug 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
While he raises his voice and screams louder, |
WOW;; SO YOU`RE SAYiNG HE WAS SAYiNG ALL THiS MEAN STUFF AND FiNALLY SHE COULDN`T TAKE iT ANYMORE. THAT`S AMAZiNG! |
by Yella
Your so talented... please keep up the good work... you have a beautiful talent! 5/5 |
by Natalie
Wow! This was really sad, but really good! The flow was flawless and the rhymes were great! I can relate alot too! You had a really strong powerful ending aswell, which made it even better. A great write, hun! And thanks for what you said in your comment. I nearly cried, tehe. I'm an emotional person. =P Anywho, I'm off to read some more! Keep it up! |
by Ike Dizzle
This poem is true. Words can kill. Not physically but emotionally. Also mentally. 5/5 |
Great job |