Great job
Very Sad
lovely Description
5/5
~MF~

This poem is true. Words can kill. Not physically but emotionally. Also mentally. 5/5
-Kakashi

Wow! This was really sad, but really good! The flow was flawless and the rhymes were great! I can relate alot too! You had a really strong powerful ending aswell, which made it even better. A great write, hun! And thanks for what you said in your comment. I nearly cried, tehe. I'm an emotional person. =P Anywho, I'm off to read some more! Keep it up!

Natalie``

Your so talented... please keep up the good work... you have a beautiful talent! 5/5

WOW;; SO YOU`RE SAYiNG HE WAS SAYiNG ALL THiS MEAN STUFF AND FiNALLY SHE COULDN`T TAKE iT ANYMORE. THAT`S AMAZiNG!

x3--------SHELBY