Disillusioned

What??
sorry but i was lost
very lost.
you should try making your work a little longer.........
hmmm......
yeah....
~HazE

Once again i liked it, just wished it was longer

Wow i really like this one :D i wouldnt change anything about it, right away you captured my attetion and the ending was a twist i didnt see coming. good job :)

~Terra

Wel these r good poems, just a thought, but it might make u feel better if u rite 1 about getting passed the bad things in ur life and moving on to better things... just a thouht

Your poetry is really good but whats with the lenth you should be making them longer i look forward to seeing more of your work :):):)