Awwwwwww, 5/5 great poem! My favorite staza is
Tell me that I'll never find,
Someone to be with till the end.
Tell me I'm not worth anything,
And that my heart will never mend.
:) great job

I don't think all these things you said can actually be true, though I know sometimes it feels like that. I've been through that. I think the saddest stanza was the fourth one. =(

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Awww thats very sad... but i kno how u feel. i can relate.. i loved it. u hve such talent. i relaly liked it. it has great flow great rhythm and word choice. its sad.. deep adn has alot of emotions in it. great job 5/5
stay strong
luve angie

Very sad, but very well written.. 5/5 xx

I might be the only one so far that doesn't find this poem sad. I couldn't feel the emotions the speaker was trying to put forth, nor could I sense any kind of pain beyond the words. The wording made sense but some places seemed off and rough at first such as your first couple of stanzas while the one:
Tell me that I'll never find,
Someone to be with till the end.
Tell me I'm not worth anything,
And that my heart will never mend.
Was written better than the first couple of lines. I thought it was a good attempt at a poem but not the type that would want me to rush out and say it was full of talent unfortunately. It was good though so keep praticng at sending emotion to your readers!

Great job. your a great poet. keep up the good work. :)

Great job. your a great poet. keep up the good work. :)

Wow very strong words. I truly feel this way wow like right on the dot.

Awww! So sad! Very, very powerful! Its strong words used. Its a great job! You write great! Keep it up! xx