Hey...i really like this poem it does show a lot of feeling
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You freakin sucked in this 1..naw im just playin jus read the end of ya poem..lol. keep it good

A avery nice poem, great job

How the hell can u criticise such an amazing poem. haha its great : )

This poem shows such emotion n really brings out the love you feel for him. it is something that no one should wish to change. it is your thoughts perfectly writen with the pen at your fingertips.

Great show of your feelings.

"Your peachy soft lips
I am kissed by a saint,
god gives me this happiness,
for it is my fate."

So beautiful, you're vocab is really soft and tender and it gives out some great emotion
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I cant criticize because it was beautiful and i saw no faults, it was written well and flowed okay.
you have talent
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